Reflection

Some of the revisions that I made to my original web introduction were because of my results from the “Readability Test Results”. My test results came back saying that it had an average grade level of about an 8, meaning that it could easily be understood by 13-14 year olds. I don’t think it surprised me much, because the way that I wrote it I tried to break it up into different sections and use less words in my sentences.

I tried to keep it straight to the point in my introduction. Some approached that I took in my revisions were first trying to take out any filler words that were unnecessary. Trying to also keep my sentences shorter so they would flow better and be quicker for the reader to read. I think that my revision allow my introduction to flow better and makes the piece less wordy than the first original post.